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Goodbye, Honey... (Tickle Story)

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Published: Apr 30, 2015

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Hey guys, how is going? This is my first story ever about tickling...so, it'll probably be the worst story ever posted on DA XD But i don't care....because i had a lot of fun writing it if you want more stories...just make me now it in the comment section below

If you like this one , leave a comment...i would love that and....have fun tickling!

Our story start in a little town in Nevada, a pretty little town we should say: quiet, full of green, full of nice people but with some little problems like all other towns in this world.
But let's not talk about the town, instead let's talk about our Nina Rin. She's a girl like all others or maybe even a little more. She has a lot of friends, good grades at school, a beautiful body and a loads of boys who would kill for having a date with her. A great life we can say, however all that glisters is not gold.
The only bad mark in her almost perfect life is to date back to the day of that terrible accident, when her lovely mother died. She was just 8 years old when that happened; she was coming back home with her mom when they decided to have a little break from their journey. However, a truck lost his control and crushed against their car. She survived, but her mother died shielding her with her body.
Unfortunately, today is the 10th anniversary of her death and Nina is always quite sad and lonely these days, because she misses her so much that she can't think to anything else. Not to mention that her mother's favorite game was also her favorite one: its name was "The Tickle Garden". A cute tickling game that her mother played with her sometimes. She tickled her belly, her pits and her little pudgy feetsies; and since then she started to love tickling too.

Now, another school day is over and our Nina is coming back home with her friends which don't suspect anything about her sadness. She's also a really strong girl too! Just like her mother always said to her: "Smile honey, no matter what happens".
After she greets her friends, she finally arrived home:
"Dad, i'm home!" She said throwing her bag on the couch before walking in the kitchen. "Dad?".
No answer, no one was home, her father nor her sister: "Where are everyone?".
Suddenly, she noticed a stick note on the fridge: "Dear, me and your sister have gone to the doctor if you are hungry the meal is in the microwave----Dad"

"Oh ok...i guess i'll stay alone then" She sobbed throwing the note in the basket and started to warm up her meal. When she was done, her sadness overwhelmed her again. Her empty home recalled lots of memories in her mind, especially memories of when she played tickling with her mother.

"Hehehehehe mommy nohoohoho!"

"Awww, what's the matter? Is your your little tummy ticklish?"

"Yeheheheah!"

Images and sounds of her and her mom playing tickles on the couch appeared right in front of her eyes, almost like she was watching a film, a film that ended when big tears started forming into her eyes: "Mom..." The poor little girl started crying and whining, trying to hold in tears but in vain. She came back to reality when the phone rang.

"Hello?"

"Oh, you're home! Good, i wanted to be sure you were fine"

"Yeah, i'm fine Dad..." She was obviously lying, and her father knew that, especially the reason of that.

"Ehm...ok...well, i'll come back later so...you take care"

"Okay..." That was the only word she managed to say before closing her dad's call, worried that she would begin to cry in front of her father. After their little conversation, she decided to have a little nap. She walked upstairs, and then right in her room collapsing on the bed. She took a while to fall asleep...but pretty soon she was sleeping like an angel...and she started dreaming.

Suddenly, she waked up because of some noises coming from the kitchen. Groaning a little bit, Nina got up from her bed and began walking downstairs like a zombie searching for some brains. Once she finally reached the kitchen, her mind turned on again:
"Dad, are yo..." Her words were damped and her heart almost came out from her chest because of what she saw.
Humming near the kitchen, there was a beautiful brown-haired woman...maybe on her thirty, wearing a red blouse and blue jeans...around her, Nina saw what seemed like an aura of light. Maybe the woman was an angel? Or maybe she was dreaming? Yeah...probably the second one.

"Moma..." The poor little girl managed to say with her eyes full of tears.

The woman heard her and turned toward her: "Oh, good morning honey!" She was really her beloved mother!

Nina was paralyzed from the happiness and pain when tears started falling down from her eyes right on her bare feet. It was then that she realized that something was different, especially her. In fact, she was 8 years old again just like the day of the accident.

"Honey..are you okay?" The woman said quite worried at the sight her daughter's tears.

Nina couldn't answer, because her speech were smothered from the weeping:

"Moma..." She said before running toward her, hugging her loved mother like she didn't for quite some times now.

"It's okay...honey i'm here" The sweet woman said, gently caressing her hair.

"Moma...i've missed you so much!" She stammered between her crying.

"I know...i've missed you too...but now i'm here" Her moma kissed her forehead, trying to stop her weeping, and then her long and slender fingers slipped under her little shirt, poking the soft sides of her daughter.

"EEK!" Nina immediately squealed. "Moma...?"

"Looks like you're still really ticklish!" A wide smiled lit up on the woman's face, completely surrounded by an angelic aura.

Nina's tears immediately disappeared and a big smile took their place: "Yeah...i'm insanely ticklish!"

It was then than her mother smirked and playfully started wiggling her fingers in the air, her tongue slightly stick out from her mouth while an hungry animal look appeared on her face:

"Ohhh i'm gonna getcha!"

"Oh oh.." Nina giggled playfully, knowing to well what was coming. So, the little girl runs out of the kitchen as fast as possible, trying to reach the couch where her mom would probably give her the sweet tickles that she missed so much in this ten years, that same tickling that made her loving all other tickles. But this one...this one was different, special in some way...maybe because that was her moma's tickling.
Nina runs away giggling like a little 8 years old girl, with her mother chasing her. Once she reached the couch, she immediately felt her moma's fingers worming under her shirt searching for her cute tummy:

"Nahahhahahahahaha mohohohhohommahahahah!"

"Awww what's the matter are your little tummy ticklish"

Hell yeah if it was! But Nina was in Heaven when she heard those words again, she always hoped to hear them one last time, especially because she knew what they meaned. Her moma always said those words before the "Tickle Garden" start.
To her happiness, the woman turned her so that now she could directly starred into her eyes, then she lifted her daughter's shirt in anticipation from their little game. Nina smiled as well, knowing what was about to happen.

"In the Tickle Garden there are a lot of flowers...birds singing in their nests, and the little bees.." When the bees came, the tickles arrived too. Her fingers started buzzing in Nina's little belly button, just like a bee who was trying to eat some nectar from a flower. But instead of nectar, the bees found streams of giggles coming out from the little girl's mouth.

"YaaaahahahahAHHAhahahahahahah not the behehehehhes!!!"

"Not the bees? Ok! And then we have the butterflies..." The bees left the button and they started flickering around Nina's tender and smooth tummy, just like butterflies. They tickled her softly and gently, like butterflies' wings or feathers according to your point of view.

"Naaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahahhaah!" Shrieks and squeals of ticklish love poured out from the 8 years old girl while she squirmed and wriggled like a little worm. "What's next? Oh yeah i remember now eheheh"

"Then we have some cute little ants who loves soft and pudgy feetsies!" This time was the turn of her feet, her moma's nails danced and flickered all around her pinky soles and puffy toes, just like ants who were crawling on her feet, searching for giggles and squeals when they traveled between her poor toesies.

"NAAAAAHAHAHAHHA NAHAHAHT THE FEET MOOHOHHOMAHAHAHAHA!!" Nina screamed with laughter just like ten years ago, with some tears forming in her eyes. She wasn't sure if she was crying because of the tickles or her happiness. "Oh oh, here it is!!"

"And then comes the big bad wolf...GRAAW!" Her moma growled playfully before she blew a big and noisy raspberry right on her belly button, her lips vibrated and tickled like hell on Nina's helpless tummy while her mother licked inside her button with her slimy tongue, adding more ticklish agony for her beloved daughter.

"YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" Nina let out the loudest scream ever, while ticklish jolts washed over her poor little body, but she loved each ones of them.

Suddenly, some one knocked on the door and the tickles ended. The woman got up from her daughter, she kissed her on her forehead and walked toward the door.

"Moma.. *pant* *pant* where are you going?!" Nina said while she tried to catch her breath, but a worried grip assaulted her heart. She was scared...she didn't want to lose her again! She wanted to stay with her forever or at least she wanted to hug her for the last time! But she couldn't...she couldn't move for whatever reason. Really soon, she started crying again...the fear and the pain of losing her mother again was killing her.

"Moma......no"

"it's ok, honey...i'll always be by your side...and remember: Smile, no matter what happen" The woman smiled to her little daughter, tears formed on her eyes as she was sad too. Nina wasn't the only one that wanted to stay there forever, but unfortunately, the dream was almost over: "Goodbye, honey..." The woman said for the last time...before she opened the door...and walked into the light...probably coming back to Heaven.

"Moma...no..wait...MOMAAAAAAAAAA!!"

It was then that Nina woke up, her face completely wet with tears as she realized that she was in her bed, completely alone and her mother was gone...once again. The sadness started to overwhelm her again, she couldn't hold in the tears that flowed down her cheeks once again; but when she saw the photo of her mother next to her she smiled.
Her moma probably came back into her dream because she hate seeing her crying...and she wanted to give her a last visit. Nina grabbed her photo...and looked at it for quite sometimes with a wide smile on her face. Then she went back to sleep again, hugging the photo of her lovely mother:

"The little bees...and then the little butterflies...." Heart